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Your Essay

The ending is really refreshing and insightful. However, the beginning of the essay is terrible, appalling, disastrous. I don’t know why you like using long sentences so much. Are you trying to make it a signature or something? I don’t think you really take my advises because I say the same thing every time. If you really want to use long sentences you need to use them where applicable and you still need to write them in a way that is easy to understand. Your readers are not looking for long ass sentences that don’t really make sense


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